You may want to revise your poem to include more sensory details. Consider what the shoes look like.
I like how you said sounds slient, and looks dirty it sounds cool
This is a great poem. You get to the point with wearing your shoes and how they are used everyday.
You may want to revise your poem to include more sensory details. Consider what the shoes look like.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said sounds slient, and looks dirty it sounds cool
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem. You get to the point with wearing your shoes and how they are used everyday.
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